tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6776392765257408808.post3833719153169030030..comments2024-03-20T16:17:52.427-07:00Comments on Master Meat Worlds: CommentsMaster Meathttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14994258264873997331noreply@blogger.comBlogger353125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6776392765257408808.post-54500589682033427332015-10-31T17:03:30.723-07:002015-10-31T17:03:30.723-07:00Holding out hope for the promised updates before H...Holding out hope for the promised updates before Halloween. Happy Halloween, Samhain or whatever else tickles your fancy this time of year all. <br /><br />Other comment: Can we archive this comment thread and shorten it up some? It's getting to the point, if someone doesn't post at the end of the list and you don't click "Load more" multiple times, you don't get to see the new comments.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6776392765257408808.post-41910740648741748772015-10-28T12:08:45.932-07:002015-10-28T12:08:45.932-07:00@Domino_X
Thanks for the update. Wasn't trying...@Domino_X<br />Thanks for the update. Wasn't trying to be a dick or rush you in anyway. I swear I am trying to be as patient as possible. :)<br /><br />@Anonymous<br />Yes, yes I can imagine that. I would reckon every single author is urged by their publisher to have a book ready to be released every year or they won't have a contract with said publisher anymore. And those are made of multiple chapters, not just one. Though, mind you, this is a blog site, not a high end publisher by any means. And every story that is on this blog site are awesome and I, as well as everyone else here, appreciate what Mastermeat, Domino_X and Bad Liar do for us! <br /><br />Thanks again to the three of you; Mastermeat, Domino_X and Bad Liar, for writing these stories and also sometimes using our input when you find it lining up well!Spydiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17996541691118053221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6776392765257408808.post-12959765305309402992015-10-28T12:07:48.222-07:002015-10-28T12:07:48.222-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.Spydiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17996541691118053221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6776392765257408808.post-51914876420514040862015-10-24T16:09:04.037-07:002015-10-24T16:09:04.037-07:00It hasn't exactly been subtly presented that W...It hasn't exactly been subtly presented that Wendy and Mary are destined to become an open-couple. As such I had just assumed that Wendy's mother taking her daughter's virginity would be the watershed moment signifying that they had both fully succumbed to the brainwashing and had finally and fully embraced their new lifestyles / outlooks...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6776392765257408808.post-85530476751065947242015-10-23T08:08:58.468-07:002015-10-23T08:08:58.468-07:00Domino X ---> I really hope to read this new ch...Domino X ---> I really hope to read this new chapter at the end of October since I have a big week-end where I will need a good read to keep me busy ! ^^<br /><br />Keep us in touch, please.<br /><br /><br /><br />MasterMeat ---> So, did you change many things in Silver Witch chapter 11 since our last discussion by Email ?Youplanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6776392765257408808.post-61661386881723086182015-10-18T22:56:02.331-07:002015-10-18T22:56:02.331-07:00Hey Cory I appreciate your eagerness in wanting a ...Hey Cory I appreciate your eagerness in wanting a status update on Brainy University. As I mentioned many times I also appreciate everyone's patience in the chapter updates. Right now I'm tweeking a few things in chapter two that I don't like before I submit and go through the editing process. Right now it doesn't look like I have to rewrite anything major but there's parts of it that I think can use a little more polish or clarification. Honestly I'm hoping to get this baby out to you late October or early November. In regards to chapter 3 I got a in very, very early draft format. Since I split it off from chapter two I'm taking a look here and there to see what I can do to polish it off some. I'm looking to stretch a few things out to expand what Claire and her roommates are going through. I thank all of you for your patience in this whole endeavor of mine.Domino_Xnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6776392765257408808.post-16714910812748342982015-10-16T10:55:04.726-07:002015-10-16T10:55:04.726-07:00they'll be posted when they're ready. Imag...they'll be posted when they're ready. Imagine yourself as an author and being hounded into writing. Blech I can't think of anything that is a bigger incentive for writers block or a rushed/shoddy job. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6776392765257408808.post-7686794288726376332015-10-16T09:26:14.472-07:002015-10-16T09:26:14.472-07:00any ETA of publishing on either one of these two s...any ETA of publishing on either one of these two stories?Spydiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17996541691118053221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6776392765257408808.post-90410630061021598182015-10-01T14:14:48.613-07:002015-10-01T14:14:48.613-07:00I really hope to read chapter 2 (and 3) soon. The ...I really hope to read chapter 2 (and 3) soon. The wait has been really, really big. If you need any help or advice, please feel free to ask here or in an email.<br /><br />About splitting the chapter in two parts, chapters 2 and 3, I don't think you should torture your head too much about how or when to do it. In my opinion, this is not really a difficult problem. Here are, in my opinion, the points where you could make the transition between two chapters :<br /><br />1) Change in time : the events between chapter 2 and chapter 3 are occuring at different times (different days, some hours between the two chapters, or even chapter 3 dexcripting what is happening to some characters before chapter 2)<br /><br />2) Change in place : if chapter 2 events are occuring at, let's say, Claire's school, then if some other events are specifically happening in another place (the street, Traci's home, her roommate's place...), then it could be a good time to begin another chapter.<br /><br />3) Change in action : if something really big happen at one point in the story (Claire having her first deep kiss with Jessica, Claire's mom coming to visit Claire for one day, Claire's first time masturbating of her own free will watching a lesbian movie...), then it's again a good time to end the chapter. Plus, you can finsh in this case with a cliffhanger.<br /><br /><br />Well. What I want to say is that you musn't aim at the perfection, and think too much of what is good or not. Of course, thinking about that a little is mandatory for the quality of a good story, but if you drag too much on these thoughts... well, you'll drag too much on the chapters and they will come much more slowly than what was expected at first.<br /><br />I hope we'll have some news from you and that you could give us at least an estimation for chapter 2. Cheer up, and thanks again for your work !Youplanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6776392765257408808.post-20917376182822676622015-09-18T05:41:43.604-07:002015-09-18T05:41:43.604-07:00Tad bit excited to see what you both have and are ...Tad bit excited to see what you both have and are coming up with.Spydiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17996541691118053221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6776392765257408808.post-16181486382482680742015-09-12T06:13:38.709-07:002015-09-12T06:13:38.709-07:00Awesome ^_^ I'm glad you haven't given up ...Awesome ^_^ I'm glad you haven't given up on such a promising chapter. Thank you for the feedback!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6776392765257408808.post-63193942871188428642015-09-11T20:30:10.458-07:002015-09-11T20:30:10.458-07:00Here's the current status on chapter 2 to Brai...Here's the current status on chapter 2 to Brainy University. MM and DB have given me a lot of feedback and assistance with this chapter. One of the things pointed out was the monstrous amount of details that I was putting into this chapter.<br /><br />So with that in mind I made the only decision that I could make. Which is continue writing and eventually find a point where I can split this chapter in half. So essentially I've been writing both chapters 2 and 3 for Brainy University. I really apologize for the very long turn around. I'm working on it as best as I can and really up to have it out when I can. I again appreciate the patience all of you have given me and hope that what I release will be well worth itDomino_Xnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6776392765257408808.post-10680076808671423932015-09-08T23:17:31.602-07:002015-09-08T23:17:31.602-07:00Currently editing the draft of SW11.Currently editing the draft of SW11.MasterMeatnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6776392765257408808.post-86434052477008876772015-09-08T12:48:05.666-07:002015-09-08T12:48:05.666-07:00Any news on SW11 and BU2? Any news on SW11 and BU2? Spydiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17996541691118053221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6776392765257408808.post-12954979122300069562015-08-08T07:09:07.126-07:002015-08-08T07:09:07.126-07:00No worries, just don't give up is all we ask :...No worries, just don't give up is all we ask :) Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6776392765257408808.post-74360136625606089052015-08-05T21:12:24.277-07:002015-08-05T21:12:24.277-07:00Still working on chapter 2, very, very sorry on th...Still working on chapter 2, very, very sorry on the slow progress :(Domino_Xnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6776392765257408808.post-73540505515550183812015-07-22T22:18:50.554-07:002015-07-22T22:18:50.554-07:00I only work on one chapter of one story at a time....I only work on one chapter of one story at a time. It's easier for me that way.MasterMeatnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6776392765257408808.post-26479856021121124072015-07-21T04:26:26.385-07:002015-07-21T04:26:26.385-07:00Thanks for the news.
By the way, I'm curious ...Thanks for the news.<br /><br />By the way, I'm curious to know if you are usually working on two chapters from the two different stories at the same time, or if you start to write one when the other is finished ?<br /><br /><br />Domino, I'm taking this opportunity to ask where you are in your chapter 2 of Brainy University ?<br /><br /><br />The wait is really long, I need some new stuff ! ^^Youplanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6776392765257408808.post-21457120517610549082015-07-07T00:23:44.288-07:002015-07-07T00:23:44.288-07:00No ETA for either stories, but the draft for the n...No ETA for either stories, but the draft for the next SW chapter is about 1/3 complete. It's going to be longer than the previous chapter.MasterMeatnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6776392765257408808.post-72679842530053906392015-06-23T22:48:20.646-07:002015-06-23T22:48:20.646-07:00Any ETA on SW or BT? It's been a while since I...Any ETA on SW or BT? It's been a while since I got my drug of choice :)Eugenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06146191105168224214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6776392765257408808.post-52728759001275942102015-06-23T22:32:31.894-07:002015-06-23T22:32:31.894-07:00The series is not done yet. I'm current workin...The series is not done yet. I'm current working on the next chapter for SW.MasterMeatnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6776392765257408808.post-66527811452859386652015-06-21T05:15:59.168-07:002015-06-21T05:15:59.168-07:00Brainy Teen done?Brainy Teen done?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6776392765257408808.post-22573860110608120052015-03-04T08:20:44.121-08:002015-03-04T08:20:44.121-08:00MasterMeat ---> There. As promised, I've se...MasterMeat ---> There. As promised, I've sent to you my feedback on updated chapters 19 and 20. I hope they will be of some help for you.<br /><br />Domino_X ---> Don't worry. Even if I am a bit disappointed, I know that life has its priorities. I'll keep waiting, no problem. Take care ! ;)Youplanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6776392765257408808.post-41542592042345732372015-03-03T12:24:00.197-08:002015-03-03T12:24:00.197-08:00Unfortunately work related issues put a wrench in ...Unfortunately work related issues put a wrench in me working on chapter two during February. However there is a light at the end of the tunnel. If everything goes according to plan I should be able to jump back into it soon. With that being said I don't have a solid date on when it will come out. In regards to where it will launch first. I think having it appear here first would be appropriate since Brainy University is a spin-off of Brainy Teen.Domino_Xnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6776392765257408808.post-23178052044747406852015-03-02T08:08:41.849-08:002015-03-02T08:08:41.849-08:00MasterMeat ---> Really nice additions to the ch...MasterMeat ---> Really nice additions to the chapters ! As I've read them some days ago, I will send you soon my feedback by Email, as usual.<br /><br />Domino_X ---> Any date or estimation for chapter 2 of Brainy University ? Will you post it here at first, or at MC Stories ?Youplanoreply@blogger.com