tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6776392765257408808.post8793580528509720853..comments2024-03-09T16:18:54.287-08:00Comments on Master Meat Worlds: CommentsMaster Meathttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14994258264873997331noreply@blogger.comBlogger230125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6776392765257408808.post-26841622132690344792023-10-13T02:43:47.865-07:002023-10-13T02:43:47.865-07:00Looking forward to the next Silver Witch chapter. ...Looking forward to the next Silver Witch chapter. I hope we can explore more of Emma’s mindset during her times alone and reflecting on the acts she did on the previous chapter. Maybe how the addictive pleasure she gets from using her transformation and abilities on another girl starts warping her mind into thinking more about how good it makes her feel and less about guilt from doing this to random girls she sees in passing like Jennifer several chapters back and certainly less about escaping her predicament with the witch.<br /><br />Would also like to maybe explore Sophia’s and Emma’s sister’s perspectives on how Emma has changed. I would imagine they would notice how differently Emma has been behaving since the beginning of the story in ways that Emma herself hasn’t consciously realized. Maybe the way Emma carries herself, how she maybe dresses to show off more of her figure, how she seems to express complete disinterest if an attractive guy at school passes by or a hunky man appears on TV, but almost practically salivating at the sight of a pretty girl and unabashedly ogling the girl’s body. Maybe when it becomes time for Emma to seduce Sophia (by Emma’s own desires implanted when Emma was with the Sophia lookalike), that maybe the seduction could play out from Sophia’s perspective as she tries to resist Emma’s forceful advances until succumbing to Emma’s magic.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6776392765257408808.post-79096471627334211742023-09-28T17:54:58.886-07:002023-09-28T17:54:58.886-07:00Any place to go and pay for these writings.Any place to go and pay for these writings.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6776392765257408808.post-35983261803410114842013-04-28T18:42:51.708-07:002013-04-28T18:42:51.708-07:00smh, this comments thingy seems messed up, error m...smh, this comments thingy seems messed up, error messages and I can't get to the end :( MM please keep publishing the stories as I really like them - AND fix this damn comments board LMAO:)Bobegirlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6776392765257408808.post-21701284927477097552013-04-25T23:00:57.369-07:002013-04-25T23:00:57.369-07:00I've barely started on the next chapter becaus...I've barely started on the next chapter because I had been busy.MasterMeatnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6776392765257408808.post-33981284567997330682013-04-23T22:07:46.604-07:002013-04-23T22:07:46.604-07:00May is almost upon us. Any chance you could give u...May is almost upon us. Any chance you could give us very eager, anxious fans a status update. Pretty, pretty please with a mind controlled cherry on top.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6776392765257408808.post-35858310666683608712013-04-03T21:14:26.499-07:002013-04-03T21:14:26.499-07:00Hopefully all goes well *knocks on wood*
Thanks f...Hopefully all goes well *knocks on wood*<br /><br />Thanks for the status update MM. I can wait a month or so for a new chapter to Brainy Teen.<br /><br /><br />Yeah captchas are on the annoying side and I can just try and ignore the spam posts, but if you can delete them than that's awesome with me. Also thanks for the reasoning on the web address change.<br /><br />Any ways take care MM and can't wait to see the new BT chapter in a month or so.Domino_Xnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6776392765257408808.post-85473810384865529242013-04-03T13:54:37.479-07:002013-04-03T13:54:37.479-07:00Regarding the new web address, it's mostly for...Regarding the new web address, it's mostly for cosmetic purposes right now. The blog is still hosted by google.MasterMeatnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6776392765257408808.post-22000382245339096322013-04-03T13:40:06.766-07:002013-04-03T13:40:06.766-07:00Next chapter would come one month later, if all go...Next chapter would come one month later, if all goes well.<br /><br />I could add a captcha requirement for posting, but spam isn't big enough of a problem yet. I could just delete those spam posts they come up.MasterMeatnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6776392765257408808.post-77770530503060749552013-04-03T13:35:47.681-07:002013-04-03T13:35:47.681-07:00But Wendy being a lesbian in denial makes the stor...But Wendy being a lesbian in denial makes the story fun! That's one of the main conflicts in the story, in addition to what's happening to Madelynn and other characters. I know it kind pushes the envelope in regards to the story's plausibility, but mind control is one of the main themes in the story. In the story it's heavily implied that the mind control technology isn't perfect, which explains why the characters are still trying to resist. However, Wendy won't be in denial forever. At a certain point, she would change.<br />MasterMeatnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6776392765257408808.post-60538799169396523022013-03-31T20:08:16.064-07:002013-03-31T20:08:16.064-07:00I'm assuming that Wendy will eventually move o...I'm assuming that Wendy will eventually move out of the lesbian in denial by or near the end of the story, and become a lesbian slut/slave either to Sarah or Madelynn. In regards to Wendy's mom, my personal assumption, made from drawing conclusions from bits and pieces of comments and chapters, is that Mary, Wendy's mother, isn't going to be like Wendy in regards to the lesbianism. I think MM said he will go with the false memory implants or memory alterations with Mary. Thus giving her a former lesbian past, part of this in turn will make her accepting or encouraging of Wendy's lesbian actions and personality and also that her mindset could be set to something were she wants to go back to having lesbian sex, but just needs some kind of push to get her going. Kind of like a person trying to quit smoking, doing okay, but sometimes all it takes is just catching a wiff of smoke to get that person back on the wagon.Domino_Xnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6776392765257408808.post-49917145313378328902013-03-30T00:15:32.579-07:002013-03-30T00:15:32.579-07:00>Wendy would have no rest in being a lesbian.
W...>Wendy would have no rest in being a lesbian.<br />Wendy already has no rest in being a lesbian in denial. I hope she's not going to stay that way. Especially if her mother somehow reaches the finish line before her. In my opinion Wendy seducing her mother, with her mother always being passive in denial and yet receptive of Wendy's or other girls' seductive behavior would go well with the story.Eugenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06146191105168224214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6776392765257408808.post-56576607167053603632013-03-30T00:06:02.807-07:002013-03-30T00:06:02.807-07:00>Wendy would have no rest in being a lesbian.
W...>Wendy would have no rest in being a lesbian.<br />Wendy already has no rest in being a lesbian in denial. I hope she's not going to stay that way. Especially if her mother somehow reaches the finish line before her. In my opinion Wendy seducing her mother, with her mother always being passive in denial and yet receptive of Wendy's or other girls' seductive behavior would go well with the story.Eugenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06146191105168224214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6776392765257408808.post-50967553511106761612013-03-27T20:59:37.885-07:002013-03-27T20:59:37.885-07:00Thanks for another great chapter of Brainy Teen MM...Thanks for another great chapter of Brainy Teen MM. It looks like Lauren is either Madelynn's new trainer or she and Elena have decided to use the good ol' tactic of 'Good Cop vs. Bad Cop'. Also Madelynn's darker lesbian dom personality is starting to surface. With her deciding that it's better for her to find a way to keep Wendy as a lesbian vs. curing her and maybe resorting to more darker measures to reach her new goals. If I could suggest, I would like to see a bit more of the lesbian dom side of Madelynn come out and play more often in future chapters.<br /><br /><br />Also this chapter has Wendy "stepping up" and introducing her to lesbian acts that are outside her comfort zone. Such as lesbian anal sex, threesomes, and incest. I'm sure we'll get to see Wendy "stepping it up" some more when she and her mother meet Sarah and her mother for that special dinner.<br /><br /><br />With what's been happening I hope we get to see the next chapter soon. In that one I believe we finally get to meet Sarah's mom, Mary, Wendy's mother, is taken in and brainwashed into being another tool used to push Wendy further into being a lesbian slut, and maybe some more with Madelynn.<br /><br /><br /><br />PS<br /><br />This has nothing to do with your stories or the content within, but it looks like you have spammers posting random links, hopefully no one here is foolish to click on them, in your comments. Also the web address has changed to Brainyteen.org. Planning to move to another web address?Domino_Xnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6776392765257408808.post-1899074854317399022013-03-26T08:11:48.653-07:002013-03-26T08:11:48.653-07:00Just read the new chapter, got me wet is an unders...Just read the new chapter, got me wet is an understatement. <br /><br />Rita777 Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6776392765257408808.post-30335642537357396372013-03-22T01:48:06.764-07:002013-03-22T01:48:06.764-07:00Finally done with the first draft. Needs some edit...Finally done with the first draft. Needs some editing before I put it up.<br /><br />I'll keep trying my best on the pacing of the story, but I know it won't be possible to satisfy everyone. Every author paces their story differently, so I have no idea what's perfect pacing. However, in my opinion, bad pacing is when there is too much filler like flashbacks, events that have little or nothing to the main plot, having the story of secondary characters overshadow the main character's story, and having characters that don't develop much over the course of a very long story. Those are just some examples. Even some popular authors are prone these mistakes. <br /><br />Since my stories are mostly stroke, my priority is making them hot. Everything else comes after.<br /><br />MasterMeatnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6776392765257408808.post-83530733019653523312013-03-18T20:29:39.002-07:002013-03-18T20:29:39.002-07:00Meant to say
*chapter updates may be seen as con...Meant to say <br /><br />*chapter updates may be seen as constant rehashes of plots introduced.*Domino_Xnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6776392765257408808.post-81802044337824251662013-03-18T20:27:48.897-07:002013-03-18T20:27:48.897-07:00I wouldn't say that going with the slow pacing...I wouldn't say that going with the slow pacing is best for Brainy Teen, but trying to home in on the right one is needed. Go too slow, and readers can become bored and lose interest because the story is not really going any where in regards to development and chapter updates may be seen as constants rehashes of plots and already introduced. <br /><br />Go too fast, and you'll tend to lose the reader by bombarding them with too many plot points coming out of the blue and details might be skipped causing plotholes and adding more to reader's confusion.<br /><br />I'm not writting Brainy Teen or Silver Witch so I can't say what the perfect pacing is. That burden falls on MM, but I'm sure he's got a good handle on how to pace the story already. Anyways eagerly waiting the next chapter update, and take care.Domino_Xnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6776392765257408808.post-32164584267458627272013-03-18T04:22:59.048-07:002013-03-18T04:22:59.048-07:00This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6776392765257408808.post-48542028321341213482013-03-18T00:32:38.753-07:002013-03-18T00:32:38.753-07:00It's not done yet. Need some more time. Your p...It's not done yet. Need some more time. Your post wasn't useless, Youpla. It's a good reminder for me to stay on track.MasterMeatnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6776392765257408808.post-69696790648979717452013-03-17T17:49:23.542-07:002013-03-17T17:49:23.542-07:00DING ! DING ! DING ! It's the second half of M...DING ! DING ! DING ! It's the second half of March already ? So, any news about the next chapter's release MasterMeat ?<br /><br />Anyway, I've come upon an interesting story. Interesting, because in my opinion it shows exactly how one can waste a good story with a too fast pacing, and with no diversity among the fetishes that are shown.<br /><br />Here is the link : http://www.mcstories.com/PartyPlanning/index.html<br /><br /><br />In this story, a totally prude and religious young teen is planning for her 18th birthday party. She is extremely conservative, doens't want to have sex beforre her marriage, etc... The same goes for her boyfriend and her female friends (members of some sort of "Church meeting", or whatsoever...). Then, without many explanations (but that's not important), she is progressively brainwashed and become a total slut, so as her friends.<br /><br />The first 2 or 3 chapters are good. really. The pacing is good, we follow the heroine during her normal days, etc... We slowly see some evident signs of brainwashing as she slowly become obsessed with sex.<br />But, as soons as the last lines of chapter 3, the story loses all its interest. Everything is going too fast, Allison (the heroine) becomes completely slutty, with nearly no limits. She masturbates on phone and says so to her boyfriend, she wants to suck cocks and swallow sperms, she wants to corrupt her friends, etc...<br />And so, as the next chapter unfolds, everything is flat : there are no surprise, no progression because the character is already totally corrupted. Everything repeats, thare are sex scenes but with only commons fantaisies (triolism, lesbian, anal... That's all). The last chapters are only about Ally convincing her female friends to "lose their cherry" at her birthday party. And so the story as no purpose anymore.<br /><br />I think it is a good example to show what I often say on this board in the comments : don't rush the story, keep a slow pacing so that the reader could always be excited by waiting the next events, and add diversity to the fantaisies and the characters.<br />Well, maybe this post was totally useless. But I wanted to share my feelings about what I consider a total waste, given that the story's synopsis was good, just as the style of the author.<br /><br /><br /><br /><br />... And now, after this digression.... Waiting for Brainy Teen's next chapter ! Whooohoooooo !Youplanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6776392765257408808.post-82924578902552963332013-03-12T18:41:38.051-07:002013-03-12T18:41:38.051-07:00* for me to always keep calling her 'Wendy'...* for me to always keep calling her 'Wendy's Mom'Domino_Xnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6776392765257408808.post-50300380792283483802013-03-12T18:40:56.526-07:002013-03-12T18:40:56.526-07:00Thanks, I primarily wanted to know because it was ...Thanks, I primarily wanted to know because it was starting to get annoying for to always keep calling her 'Wendy's Mom'Domino_Xnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6776392765257408808.post-79106720436333357692013-03-12T00:56:31.824-07:002013-03-12T00:56:31.824-07:00Wendy's mom's first name is Mary.Wendy's mom's first name is Mary.MasterMeatnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6776392765257408808.post-75258670237618888102013-03-10T16:11:46.504-07:002013-03-10T16:11:46.504-07:00Have no disappointment from me in regards to Wendy...Have no disappointment from me in regards to Wendy's mom lesbian conversion not showing up in the next update. Actually I think having it show up the next chapter would be better. Since she's technically a new character entering the lesbian sex slave seduction games. Having Wendy's mom show up in chapter 18 gives you, in my opinion, more room to fully introduce her into the Brainy Teen series vs. having to wedge it in amongst the other characters in the upcoming chapter. Just of curiosity, do you think you can at least tell us what Wendy's mom's first name is? I know the last name is Love-Livingston, but curious as to what the first name would be.Domino_Xnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6776392765257408808.post-18609797123558946102013-03-10T06:19:20.480-07:002013-03-10T06:19:20.480-07:00I think it's a really wise decision. Don't...I think it's a really wise decision. Don't rush the brainwashing of the two moms. They are, by their relationships to their daughters, as important as them ! In fact, if you chose to do as slowly for them than for their daughters, it wouldn't bother me.<br />Anyway, I'm waiting the next chapter with great anticipation !Youplanoreply@blogger.com