Monday, November 6, 2006

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102 comments:

  1. I am only halfway done, but this is a superb chapter Domino! You are a fantastic writer who knows how to push all the right buttons! Thanks!!!

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    1. Hey Kim ... so how is chapter 4 sounding ... want to drop any hints Alexandra x

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    2. I wish I knew Alexandra...I was referring to Chapter 3. I am as anxious as anybody to Read Chapter 4:)
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  2. I'm not sure why, but I get a feeling Chapter 4 is coming soon. I know nothing. I'm not connected to anyone who writes any stories here, but I still have a feeling. C'mon gut feeling, don't let me down.

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  3. Chapter 4 to Brainy University is undergoing the editing process. Can't say when it will be done but I thank you all for being patient. No ETA on when the final draft will be done. I want to work out all the kinks before presenting the final version to everyone.

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    1. I'm just glad the story continues:) Thanks Domino

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  4. We look forward to reading it domino!

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  5. Brainy University AlumniJuly 26, 2018 at 10:12 PM

    hoo boy, one of these days I'm going to refresh a sweet surprise. C'mon authors, editors and contributors, we want to give you plaudits and praise.

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    1. Chapter 4 is still in the editing process. However, it's going through it's 4th edit. Hopefully it will be done soon. I really appreciate everyone's patience and thank you all so much. Currently I've been working on chapter 5 to Brainy University.

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    2. Thanks for the update. Looking forward to the 4th chapter :).

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    3. Brainy University AlumniJuly 30, 2018 at 3:15 PM

      That's good news. I'm glad work continues, as I come here every day and look forward to some news or fresh content. Happy summer Domino_X, appreciate your effort.

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  6. And like most "good" news here, it's hollow. We just want new chapters, not novels-in-chapter form.

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  7. "Chapters" 1/4 as long 4x as often would be a LOT better, for everyone I would think. Almost two years now since the actual Last Brainy Teen chapter, and not a whiff of the next one; nearing TEN bloody months since Brainy University Chapter 4 was put into "the editing process", and STILL nothing published or posted...

    Definitely looking like all of this has become the essentially-abandoned process that it looked like it was heading for 4+ years ago.

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  8. Just dropping by to say that I'm still working on chapter 22. The process seems slow but it doesn't mean the story is abandoned.

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    1. I'm so glad it's not abandoned. Thanks for all the quality hard work!
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    2. "The process seems slow..."

      Uh, you turned out the first *FOURTEEN* chapters of Brainy Teen in UNDER a year (Feb 2011 - Jan 2012). Now, here, on Chapter 22, eight years (and only 7 more chapters) later, you've gone over TWENTY-THREE MONTHS since the last Chapter; then coming on here and saying that this just "seems" slow is a slap in the face and an insult to your loyal readers. At this point, it's gone far, FAR beyond "slow", at this rate, it'd be monumentally effing gracious to call it glacial...

      If you don't want to do it anymore (and c'mon, anyone with half a brain can see that you're "enthusiasm" for it, as compared to when you began the project, has virtually disappeared) why not just admit that and move on with your life and stop stringing us along?

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    3. I'm not stringing readers along. First draft of chapter 22 is already completed. It's in editing status. But because my editor is currently editing chapter 4 of Brainy University, it'll be a while before he gets back to Brainy Teen.

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    4. Ah, so it's not your fault that the editors are moving along slower than the frozen corpse of a tortoise.

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    5. It's my fault too. We have other commitments so that contributes to the slow rate of production as well.

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    6. Well, unlike others I am content to wait since each chapter has been lengthy, well written, free and contained at least two scene's I've enjoyed. Although it -is- disconcerting to hear that Brainy University is still in the editing phase. Domino said he had sent it to the editor 7? 8? months ago?

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  9. "seems slow ..."
    Seems???!!??
    IS SLOW!!!!!

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  10. No shame in admitting what is most likely true and you've gotten bored of it. Writing burns one out, especially trying to write the same story for 8 years, probably longer.

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    1. I'm not bored because I'm doing this as a hobby.

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    2. And you do do it as a hobby. 15 seconds a month.

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  11. i remember being in at the start when MM commented in original posts about authors who cornered themselves into pink dinosaurs, and i think this story just spread to far to contain, others running with extra strands has made it more complex, they could have been brought in to the main story. look at brandi the protector - 30 plus smaller chapters this year and story coming to end. we loved brainyteen but the best stories always seem to just die.

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  12. Chapter4 Brainy University - nearly a year in edit now!

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  13. Brainy University AlumniDecember 29, 2018 at 8:29 PM

    Hey all, happy holidays. Thanks to Mastermeat, Dominox and Badliar for their contributions. I look forward to seeing more good work out of everyone in the coming year. Don't let the comments get you down. I think they really want to say that they like what you are doing and would like to see more, as well. They just express it differently.

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  14. i dont think any of us have more than frustrations at heart, as i said previously the best writers poor their heart into it until they have no more to give, hummvee, tantric legion, a strange geek, xthewofliex, mastermeat we miss you all. anyone else want to offer up competitors?

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  15. Hello guys just want to say thank you all for your patience and that editing for chapter 4 to Brainy University is done and ready for publishing. Again I appreciate everyone's patience and hope the wait was worth it.

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  16. Thank You Domino! You are such a great writer it's ALWAYS wort the wait!

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  17. Very sorry for the late, late, late reply. With the Covid-19 outbreak and situations at work. Didn't have much time but enough with the excuses. So just want to say that I haven't given up on Brainy University and still working on chapter 5. I would say that it is about 90% complete. I hope to have it ready to go into editing as soon as possible.

    Also using the free time that I have I also been working on chapter 6 or a chapter interlude for Brainy University. This one will primarily focus on Claire's, Jessica's, Meredith's, and Monica's mothers and how they fall into Hecate's clutches. Definitely give it my all after I finish chapter 5.

    Again, I appreciate everyone's patience and hopefully I can get chapter 5 out soon. Thank You

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    1. thanks for the update Domino. Let me know if you want to chat about ideas :-) Alexandra x

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    2. Thank you so much for the update. Take your time.

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  18. Brainy University AlumniDecember 27, 2020 at 7:36 AM

    Happy Holidays my lesbian lovers. Still here and loving the content. Looking forward to a healthy, happy, horny 2021. Thanks to MM and Domino_X for the wonderful gifts.

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    1. Happy Holidays to you and everyone else here too!

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  19. Great to know chapter 5 of Brainy University is on the way. I am curious about Brainy Teen also. Hope to hear news about that story too. Both are magnificient!

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  20. Brainy University AlumniApril 16, 2022 at 3:11 PM

    You've inspired someone to write their own lesbian mind control fiction! I'm always happy to see more in this vein.

    https://mcstories.com/WendysPinkLipstickConversion/index.html

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    1. I'm glad Brainy Teen inspired another author to write their story. This is well written. The author really paid attention to details.

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  21. Brainy Teen AlumniApril 30, 2022 at 3:35 PM

    I see you published another story on EMCSA. It is good to see you writing.
    https://mcstories.com/GoldenCoven/GoldenCoven1.html

    Is Golden Coven part of Silver Witch canon? Or is it a new, unrelated storyline?

    Can we expect to see it published here?

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    1. Yes, Golden Coven is part of the Silver Witch universe. I will publish it here shortly.

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  22. So it's all gone eh. Oh well.

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    1. Via Internet Archive I could find and copy up to Brainy Teen 21 and Brainy University 4. Its a shame because I really like Chapters 22 and 5 for their respective series.

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    2. It's not all gone. I'm going to edit the stories a bit before republishing them.

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    3. When will they be back?

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  23. Nothing opens are all the stories gone? I am on chapter 5 of brainy university? Help!!

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  24. Hi, so at the moment the stories that were hosted here and any future updates will be published on mcstories.com after a small bit of editing.

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  25. Not only does Mcstories.com have a new restriction, all characters involved in sexual situations have to be unambiguously 18+. All stories featuring younger characters are being removed.

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  26. Oh pleeeease, don't edit them. Or if you really must change some events for MCStories, at least just let an original version on this blog. Events where Mary was brainwashed into loving young teens were some of thehottest. It will really be a huge lost if you erase that.

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    1. The edits would be small. It won't be a huge loss.

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  27. You could publish in sexstories dot com, there is no censorship

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    1. Oh my god, I haven't been to that site in years and years and years. Probably since Obama's first term. Ohhhhhh my god it's all coming back to me.

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    2. It's legality rather than censorship.

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  28. Any idea when they'll be up?

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    1. Chapter 23 will be published first in a week or two. Afterwards, the older chapters would be gradually be republished, 1 or 2 chapters per week if possible.

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  29. That is excellent news! Will the older chapters be republished in chronological or decending order? It would be good to be able to re-read 22 before 23.

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    1. yes, what's a week or 2 after years....

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    2. It'll be published in reverse order. I'll try to get chapter 23 in with chapter 22.

      By the way, Happy New Year, everyone.

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    3. Brainy University AlumniJanuary 1, 2023 at 7:16 PM

      Always good to hear from you, MM. Looking forward to everything.

      Happy New Year to you too.

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  30. Thank you for 23 enjoyed

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  31. A week or two.., or three, or four... etc

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    1. 23 is published on mcstories.com.

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    2. oh, they must have deleted the rest of the chapter

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    3. You could've posted a link... 🙄🤦‍♀️

      https://mcstories.com/BrainyTeen/BrainyTeen19.html

      It seems like a chapter from a substantially-different version of the story that lived here for years, but it is, at least, *something* new...

      Any chance of getting access to the original chapters (that used to be here) from an anonymous online archive something? It looks like the 'new' versions are going down a substantially different, more cliche / rote road.. 🤔😕

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    4. "I'm too lazy to search a website and needs a direct link"
      lol, lmao even. It doesn't feel different that much compared to what came before outside of most of the chapter being for new characters. I'm here for Wendy and Mary and yet we're getting more distractions.

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    5. You can get the old stuff up to 21 via the internet archive. Given the size of the later Brainyteen stories and the time we have been waiting, I suspect that 23 is being cut into smaller parts.

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    6. "I'm too lazy to search a website and needs a direct link"

      LOL @ the hypocrisy of someone being too entirely lazy to c+p a relevant HYPERLINK, while on the World Wide Web and talking about a page from another site, then inexplicably thinking that they've somehow got one over by accusing literally anyone ELSE of being 'lazy'! 🤣

      FYI: the point was actually to highlight the complete and utter lack of COMMON COURTESY that was demonstrated by the original, actually-lazy-ass, poster!

      That being said, apparently, you couldn't even summon up the miniscule cognitive wherewithal needed to to observe that, unlike the OP, I actually *DID* go and search the site *AND* copied the link *AND* posted it here for the convenience of others!

      Y'kno, because, I'm neither lazy nor cognitively bankrupt, *AND* I understand wtf common courtesy is!

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  32. I'm not so sure 23 is being cut into smaller parts. Remember that they said they were trying to make the chapters smaller so they come out quicker

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  33. Not to be ungrateful but i hope that is the case. An introduction of multiple new characters is all well and good but the wendy arc is what compels me to read most

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  34. Ummm WTF happened to all the stories? They no longer exist on here?!?!?

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  35. Love the new Brainy University chapter. Thanks very much!

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  36. I know it's almost redundant to ask, but are there any chances of the old chapters returning? Can't find them even with Wayback

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    1. The chapters written by me will return on Mcstories, but I need to edit them first.

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  37. Is there any working link for Brainy university chapter 5?

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    1. There's currently no working link. You can email Domino_X for more info.

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    2. My email is domino_x@outlook.com

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  38. You can still technically see them on the waybackmachine if you go to view source and hide the iframe that covers everything and set the body tag visibility to inherit.

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    1. Is any of this true? If yes, details?

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    2. I feel like this sort of thing is common sense, but you go to the wayback machine on this site before everything was deleted. https://web.archive.org/web/20220330015658/https://www.brainyteen.org/

      That'll show the default page where it says "Sensitive content warning" and such, which is just an iframe covering the page. Right click on it and click "Inspect Element" which opens up the dev tools. Selecting the iframe tag you change the CSS that says "display:block" to "display:none".

      Then click on any of the other div> tags near it and you'll see a setting saying: body * { visibility: hidden; }. Just change "hidden" to "inherit".

      You can do all this automatically each time using the Chrome/Firefox extension Stylus.

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  39. I’m currently reading brainy teen on mcstories and I’m unable to find chapter 19 to 22, also I’m unable to access them from this page. Can anyone tell me how I can read them?

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    1. Those chapters currently being revised. They'll be available on mcstories once the revision is completed.

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    2. Thank you I look forward to seeing the
      Continuation of the series
      Not sure why can't see it here 😞
      Why is that? If you don't mind me asking.?? Again looking forward to seeing where things go from here and any new stories or continuations of other stories are here already doing

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  40. Chapter 23 was superb. Wendy's confusion of Daniel and Lauren when probed by Sarah, her admitting she doesn't know if getting Daniel is what she still wants. Both excellent touches.

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  41. Great, now the never ending story is now deleted. Not even a simple note to inform readers as to why. Though, given this author, that note would probably end up being several paragraphs and not get to the point

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  42. still love this series hope we get more updates and chapters

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    1. Likewise, Brainy Teen & Brainy University are epic. I fear i won't live long enough to see them concluded though. Started reading Brainy Teen when i was 49 now i'm 63.

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  43. There will be a new release for Brainy Teen next weekend.

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  44. Brainy University AlumnaFebruary 1, 2024 at 5:25 AM

    That's great news. I'm glad I kept checking the page. Will it be posted here? Or just at EMCSA?

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  45. It will be published on EMCSA for now. I just sent it to Simon.

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  46. Thanks for the new additions to Brainy Teen! Looking forward to seeing how Sarah is going go get Wendy to "do more" in regards to Lauren.

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  47. A chapter of Nealy 50k words and nothing happens, a story that inched along is now moving by millimetres. The next chapter will be 25k words on Wendy taking a dump

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    1. The focus should have stayed on Wendy. Including her friends and family is great, the stuff with Mary is a highlight but now it's just too convoluted because of all the introduced characters and the same scenes playing out. It's been several chapters since Wendy and Mary started to be brainwashed into being incestuous (and it's been since the start that Wendy's begun to be brainwashed into being a lesbian) and yet we still get scenes in the new chapters that would have fit earlier.

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    2. Wendy is still the main character. Story progression is based partly on user feedback. Scenes in the sidestories aren't necessary presented in chronological order to the main story or each other.

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  48. I'm really excited to read more chapters! I really do want to see plenty more of Wendy getting increasingly mindfucked into being what she's always meant to be.

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  49. Brainy University AlumnaFebruary 18, 2024 at 8:23 AM

    Hi MM. Read Golden Coven 2 at EMCSA. Nice to have some sexy lesbian seduction in the Silver Witch canon. Thanks for writing it. I'm excited that you've found time to write more and I look forward to more.

    re: Brainy Teen.
    I get the feeling some of the work in the latest chapters is trying to reorient the story after the removal and retooling of the older chapters. I enjoy the new stuff, but it's light on the wonderful sex scenes you've written in the past. I am in love with the lesbian transformation of Maddy and Wendy. More focus on their descent would be excellent. And Mary and Erin just have to get together. And Mary and Wendy's teacher needs to happen for real. Damn, just realized I just want more sexy scenes with all the characters with a touch of a larger war between two conspiracies.

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  50. Thanks for the new chapter! I enjoyed Mary's progression via the altered memories + the introduction/reintroduction of Shelly's character with the impact she had on Mary's life. All of the side plots are paced perfectly. As for the main story, reading about Wendy's recent exploit at the Fair re. Colin & Abigail makes me keen for Daniel to feature again, albeit because Wendy ultimately rejects him or something similar. I'd love some more introspection on Wendy's part, however subtle, that emphasizes Lauren over Daniel both physically/emotionally. Perhaps as a brief segue before focusing on Mary/Caroline and Wendy once more.

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  51. Anyone knows where you can read chapter 18 part 2 until chapter 22 from Brainy teen? I reached chapter 18 part 1 and I can't find the rest, I only see a gap and then chapter 23.

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  52. Would love to explore Wendy's thoughts about what she was involved in at the fair in the next chapter and perhaps her struggle between how immoral it was to take advantage of a girl, and how deeply excited it made her. It may also be exciting if she is invited to do something like that again, now that she knows what's going to happen. Could show her struggle, yet deep excitement as she approaches their next target, but she ultimately goes with it because of how attractive she finds this new girl and just can't pass up the opportunity to enjoy exploring her body. Then as they lure this new girl, we could explore Wendy's growing excitement. It could be very interesting if the other girls let Wendy take the lead. Wendy could apply the lipstick knowing what it's going to do to the girl, then guide the entranced girl over to a couch or bed and initiate the sexual activity with her while the other girls encourage her. Maybe then after the experience, Wendy reflects on how exciting it was despite being morally wrong, or perhaps because it was morally wrong, and goes to one of the other girls asking when they can do this again. Maybe then they let Wendy choose the next target and Wendy's corrupting mind starts excitingly sorting through all the cute girls she knows of at school, like maybe this one cute and quiet Asian girl in her English class or something.

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  53. Julia moving in to Wendy's and Mary's could have some very exciting potential towards Wendy and Mary finally getting together!

    Could be exciting to have Julia pretending to confide in both of them about the other, planting seeds to make both of them believe the other is secretly an insatiable lesbian whore and drawing them both together.

    Julia could maybe "confess" to Wendy that Mary seduced her and imply that Mary has been having affairs with many women and especially teenaged girls.

    Julia could then maybe talk privately with Mary regarding Wendy, mentioning how beautifully she's growing up. She could tell Mary that she saw Wendy being intimate with a few girls. Maybe she could also express "concern" about Wendy's other sexual interests when she "discovered" mother/daughter and sister/sister porn in Wendy's bedroom.

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